It was a really nice sunny day at camp raglan with not 1 cloud in the sky so everyone was wearing hats and sunscreen. Everyone started of with having lots of fun with so many activities.
When it was free time bob,chelsey,jade and April went to their cabins and sat down and talked because they were so tired of the activities. The day went quick and just in a blink of the eye everyone was sound asleep. Well the g7 sleeping group were wide awake and really hungry then they saw there was food left in the hall they couldn't resist not having at least 1 biscuit and they thought nobody would know so they went of together to get some biscuits. They didn't realise that those were for afternoon tea for all the campers. They come back relieved that they didn't get caught. Another day went by of challenging amazing activities and then it was night they were still hungry so they grabbed not just biscuits but 3 whole plates full of food crackers,dips,chips, lollies everything. The teachers didn't notice a few biscuits but definitely noticed 3 plates they start investigating. The next day everyone gets called into the hall the teachers look very angry. They said… 1 OR 2 GROUPS HAVE BEEN TAKING FOOD DURING THE NIGHT IT NEEDS TO STOP THE GIRLS ARE LOOKING AT EACH OTHER AND WHISPERING I THOUGHT THEY WOULDN'T FIND OUT. After they meeting the girls thought they should stop but Lordez did not want to at all she said they still don't know who it is we can still eat and besides I'm starving after 10 minutes of deciding yes or no we thought OK because Lordez was trying so hard (what a try hard ) so of they went in the freezing cold with their pink pj's and slippers on but this time they walked a different way because they thought the teachers might be awake standing on guard. They walked really really quiet but what they didn't notice was that their was a camp security camera. They carry on grab a few plates of food and the camera caught everything Mrs p had a great idea let's check the footage instead of just watching around waiting to see who it is. They check the footage and see that it was the g7 sleeping group before everyone went asleep there was a meeting Mrs p said I FOUND WHO HAS BEEN STEALING THE FOOD IT IS … THE G7 SLEEPING GROUP EVERYONE STARS AT THE GROUP AND ALL THE Girls has a face as red as a tomato. Mrs rowlands takes charge and all the girls get sent home with angry parents to deal with at home along with a visit to the principal's office
hi Rebecca i like your story of school camp and i liked how you set it up how long did it take to do your story and i like the way you did the font what group were you at school camp?
ReplyDeleteI was in the g7 group and it took about 2 hours to finish
DeleteHi Rebecca your story is very long I like how you set it out and how you put in different fonts and sizes.were you in the g7 group or were you in the other group?were your parents crossed at you?what was the other groups name was not the g7 group the other group?
ReplyDeleteit was just a story i was in the g7 group but we didnt get in any trouble
DeleteHello Rebecca,
ReplyDeleteWow, I am amazed by this story, i'm technically speechless and I am dying to find out what happens next, do you think maybe you could do a part 2? The layout was awesome and just the whole story itslef was BLING! But... maybe next time you could think about checking some punctuation and spelling mistakes.
Ka Pai Rebecca, your post was great, please could you find a way to go on my blog.
hi Rebecca I like what you did with the border of your blogger and It is nice to here that you went on camp maybe next time you can inclined your name at the end.
ReplyDeletelove the writing so creative and really sweet wish I was there and next time put your name at the end.
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